名师点评EBC中级学生用书作文题(3)
文章作者 100test 发表时间 2011:10:03 22:53:28
来源 100Test.Com百考试题网
BEC作文有很强的实用性,学好了很受用。有名师指点,正好可以对照着纠正自己作文中的错误哦。
本期作文题目:
You are a key account manager for a telecommunications company. You are going to be out of the office for a week.
Write an e-mail of 40-50 words to your client.
*telling them how long you will be away
*explaining where you will be
*suggesting who they can contact while you are away.
Sample:
Dear Mr. Pawlak:
I will be out of the office for ten days from 18th November. I will be attending the Telecommunications Trade Fair in London. While I am away my colleague Marry Richards will be looking after my clients, please contact her with any questions or problems you may have.
网友作文:
To: sarah, abc company
Fr: nono, manager for aa telecommunications company
Date: Nov. 7th,2008
subject: about a week leave for business trip
I d like to tell you that #f70909>[1] I will be one-week leave for a business trip in England from Nov. 10th to Nov.15th. If you have any problems, don t hesitate to contact with my assistant julie whose extension number is 555 and she will help you to do the operation.
Thanks for your coorperation#f70909>[2].
修改:
[1]去掉
[2]去掉。 其他地方很好!