一、举实例 思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子! In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible simulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her. 更多句型: To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example 二、做比较方法: 写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的; 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语: 相似的比较: in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较: on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, … 三、换言之没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。 实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you! I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you. I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you. 或者上面我们举过的例子:I cannot bear it. 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it. 因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it. 更多短语: in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply 英语写作要诀twenty-word formula agreement: 主语和谓语在人称、数上的一致,关系代词与先行词的一致。 ambiguity: 尽量不去使用可能引起歧义的词语或句子。 brief: 文章“简为贵”,要抓住要点,简明扼要。 coherence: 文理通顺,前后连贯。 development: 主题的发挥应当充分、合理、正确。 division: 词汇、句子、段落要分配使用得当,划分要清楚,避免使用重复字句和种子片段。 figures: 正确合理使用各类修辞格式。 inflated diction: 不使用做作的语言。 key: 用适当的关键词突出主题,每段都应有主题句。 logical: 内容要符合逻辑。 message: 信息要新鲜、确实、可信。 omit: 合理删除多余的不必要部分。 proposition: 主张、观点、论述要清楚肯切、合情入理。 punctuation: 正确适时使用标点符号。 relevant: 文章一定要要题。 sentence pattern: 句型要尽量多样化。 straight: 开门见山,直来直去。 style: 文体恰切,适合内容要求。 tense: 动词时态要正确、一致、变化合理。 theme: 选题得当,主题突出。