2007英语四级写作训练(八):议论型作文2

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议论型作文之14分作文
作业：（以下为一篇11分范文，请练习按要求改写成漂亮的14分作文）

(1)"Failure is the mother of success" is a well-known proverb.(2) It teaches us that failure is not a bad thing,and as long as we can learn from the failing experience and cheer up,failure will turn into a stepping-stone to sucess.
要求：句(2)得粗体部分后加入调节观点的词,变成部分否定

(1)My personal experience is a case in point.(2) I entered for the english speech contest last year and was knocked out in the preliminary contest.(3) Not well prepared either mentally or academically then, my failure was inevitable.(4) However,from my failing experience I knew I had some problems with my pronunciation and I should learn some strategies of making public speech.(5)So in the following year,following the tapes and to imitate the speeches of native speakers I made great effort to improve my pronunciation.(6)I also read some books on public speech and practiced the theories in the discussion of English classes.(7) This year,I entered for the speech contest again.(8)I won the second prize.(9) Without the lesson I learned from last years failure,I can never succeed this year .My failure last year is the mother of my success this year.
要求：1、纠正句（3）粗体部分垂悬错文
2、纠正句（5）粗体部分的平行结构错误；
3、在粗体的句（8）前加入一个设问句，承上启下，并吸引读者注意。

The truth of the proverb has been proved by countless other facts.(2) so many new things have been invented after the inventors countless experiments (3) So many masterpieces have been written by writers whose early works were rejected by publishing houses again and again.(4) there fore ,we can safely draw the conclusion that failure is the mother of success .(5) since nobody can avoid failure,we should make failure a stepping-stion to success.
要求：1、将句(4)中的粗体部分用调节观点的词代替,使语气更缓和
2、将句（5）中的粗体部分改成设问句，强调观点，引起思考

参考答案:

"Failure is the mother of success" is a well-known proverb. It teaches us that failure is not necessarily a bad thing,and as long as we can learn from the failing experience and cheer up,failure will turn into a stepping-stone to sucess.

My personal experience is a case in point. I entered for the english speech contest last year and was knocked out in the preliminary contest.Since I was not well prepared either mentally or academically then, my failure was inevitable. However,from my failing experience I knew I had some problems with my pronunciation and I should learn some strategies of making public speech.So in the following year,following the tapes and imitating the speeches of native speakers I made great effort to improve my pronunciation.I also read some books on public speech and practiced the theories in the discussion of English classes. This year,I entered for the speech contest again.What happened? I won the second prize. Without the lesson I learned from last years failure,I can never succeed this year .My failure last year is the mother of my success this year.

The truth of the proverb has been proved by countless other facts. so many new things have been invented after the inventors countless experiments So many masterpieces have been written by writers whose early works were rejected by publishing houses again and again. there fore ,we may safely draw the conclusion that failure is the mother of success . since nobody can avoid failure,why not make failure a stepping-stion to success.