托福写作—锻造地道英语句子I
文章作者 100test 发表时间 2007:02:25 15:08:03
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托福写作其实很容易:20分钟学会三种题型的写法。托福写作其实很难,怎样才能写出地道的英语句子?建议:平时多多练习,并通过查词典把你写作时可能常说的话由Chinglish改成地道的English。下面例子可供参考:
句子:
1. The artist s work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
改进:Artists work upgrades our civilization.
2. For example, you work in a big factory.
改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
3. You ll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
改进:You ll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
6. Their brain is still very young.
改进: They are still immature.
7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
8. They can t analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.